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Be careful with there/their/they're and where/wear .

Mix short, punchy sentences for tension with longer, descriptive ones for flow. "Silence fell. Then, a bang." 11.part2.rar

Use more than just periods and commas. Try to include a question mark , exclamation mark , or ellipsis (... ) . Be careful with there/their/they're and where/wear

Don't start with "Once upon a time." Instead, drop the reader into the action or a vivid sensory moment. "The floorboards groaned as I took my first step." punchy sentences for tension with longer