"Finally," she whispered, a small, knowing smile tugging at her lips. "I thought you were going to keep me guessing forever."
How do you feel about the of the ending—should we add more dialogue or keep it focused on the emotional release ?
The rain wasn’t heavy, but it was persistent—the kind of drizzle that made the city lights of Chicago blur into a soft, neon glow. Julian sat in his car, the engine idling, staring at the warm light spilling from Maya’s apartment window.
"Finally," she whispered, a small, knowing smile tugging at her lips. "I thought you were going to keep me guessing forever."
How do you feel about the of the ending—should we add more dialogue or keep it focused on the emotional release ? Babyface - Never Keeping Secrets
The rain wasn’t heavy, but it was persistent—the kind of drizzle that made the city lights of Chicago blur into a soft, neon glow. Julian sat in his car, the engine idling, staring at the warm light spilling from Maya’s apartment window. "Finally," she whispered, a small, knowing smile tugging
